Writing challenge winners!

For this special edition celebrating the 10th challenge, we had a special prize pool and special rules! Let us see how it ended up...

Pixelator

http://aminoapps.sitiosdesbloqueados.com/p/f5h7rv

Made a fun and goofy story about spy's dreams! Since he already disguised as tom jones, that made sense! The thing is that you used a time machine in your story, meaning that it is the mercenaries of the present that go into the last, and it isn't a real backstory then. We wanted to see the mercenaries before they were hired for RED amd BLU. No big deal, the story is light hearted and entertaining. The format is not really comfortable for the readers, you should put more spaces, especially between the dialogues! Overall thw story is clearly inspirred by return to the future, I hope I didn't confuse you with my gif...

Third in the regular prize pool:mr firework

http://aminoapps.sitiosdesbloqueados.com/p/vva5s0

It is cool to see demo had to find so many jobs, and that each and every one of them would end in a disater since he is a demoman! There are some repetitions here and there, and overall I found it amusing.

Second in the regular prize pool: mercenary

http://aminoapps.sitiosdesbloqueados.com/p/lb9f79

Well there are some typos and the punctuation shows you are not used to write (or at least to write on a pc or phone) but you didn't do bad, far from it! The story is fun, believable (pyro with an italian accent is unexpected, I still loved it) and it fits scout's character so much! You have good ideas, take your time to write your stories in a clearer way!

First in the regular prize pool: Widow

http://aminoapps.sitiosdesbloqueados.com/p/bfzjlpl

Made a story, apparently inspired by r/entitledparents, not to my dislike! I could never see spy doing a job like cashier, but if it is for the lols, then yes please! Maybe that is why he is so bitter and hates children now? It is very clean, with neat dialogues, easy to understand, and I think after being abused as a cashier spy now has a superiority complex. Nice!

Now, onto the of the writers' society !

Robin (your name is in such a font I only see blank squares lel)

http://aminoapps.sitiosdesbloqueados.com/p/d82mpc

Made another story about scout! He inspired a lot of people despite not having that big of a past, didn't he? It feels perfeclty in character, fast paced and fun...I had trouble deciding who to choose as winner from the writer's society. It is very sweet to see scout's mommy boy's side :3 In of clarity and respcet of the rules, you are just as good as recon's... but hers has a little somthing more, I'll explain!

Recon

http://aminoapps.sitiosdesbloqueados.com/p/kg84zh

Is a romantic! With a single misspelling in french, the duolingo owl (and myself) will let you live then! On the last line too... More seriously, I always found it weird how spy, douche, french and womanizer stayed with scout's mom and genuinely loved her. Your flashback explained it, explaimed why spy is how he is today. At leasy that is how I understood it :') Because outside of a contest such as this one, you write a flashback for this reason, to explain why a character are who they are today. This is the little thing that made it tilt for me, scout's experience as described by robin is belivable but has no impact (aside the fact that scout can wer a milkman hat, and that isn't his default hat) on who he eventually became. Close call for that one anyways!

Hey, 3rd 2nd amd 1st place get a prize, pm me to get it! Thanks for participating, thanks for the supprt and see you for the next one!

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